Thursday, April 21, 2016




Fall Haiku 

 The trees are orange
As leaves crunch beneath my feet,
                                      what a lovely day .                                                                               
  

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 21, 2016 at 2:41 PM

    I like how you used little words to describe the season fall. I love how you ended the haiku!!

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  2. AnonymousApril 21, 2016 at 4:02 PM

    I liked how you described the colors and the leaves

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  3. AnonymousApril 21, 2016 at 4:31 PM

    I love how you say "crunch beneath my feet". It adds a sense of sound to the poem.

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  4. AnonymousApril 21, 2016 at 4:41 PM

    I like how you used very descriptive language in your poem.

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