G r a s s H a i k u
Grass blankets the ground.
While wind howls and sun glows round,
grass makes not a sound.
~Angelina Lambros
Story Journal:
I wrote the haiku poem "Grass" to show the beauty of grass. How it "blankets the ground." How when you run down a grassy hill, it comforts your feet. This is different form when you run down a hill or path made of made of man-made surfaces, such as cement. But the main reason why I wrote "Grass" is because I wanted to paint a picture of what walking on grass in only three lines. The sun glowing, winds howling, and the still quiet grass provide an image. An image through words of a sunny and windy day on the grassy plain.
I like how in only a few words, I was able to get such a clear feeling from your poem
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ReplyDeleteI like how you made your poem sound like you are really in the grass.
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