Thursday, April 21, 2016

Haiku

Danial Khoja
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Haiku
Nature is when the
sun shines, the moon glows, the grass
grows, nature is life

3 comments:

  1. I like how you expressed the different aspects of nature. When you wrote "sun shines the moon glows, the grass grows, nature is life" It made me feel deep inside that nature is to be respected and cared for

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  2. i like how you included parts of nature.such as sun shining,the moon,and grass

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  3. I like the word choice that you used. I also liked how you combined different parts of nature and different weathering.

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