pushed open the door
and burst into the rush of the hallway
I swam quickly
but cautiously
through the murky sea of the hallway
It seemed like an eternal struggle
but i heard laughter
i saw the sun
the essence of peace and happiness
The murky sea became a clear,
clear pool
the wave parted
finally something had gone right.
but then i remembered,
i was late to class
I enjoy your comparison of the hallway to a murky sea. It really IS a struggle to get from one room to the next! Great use of figurative language, Dina!
ReplyDeleteI like your poem it really shows a lot and tells a real story
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